Anatomy of a Poem: "The Greatest Show on Earth"
by Brittny Ray

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The Greatest Show on Earth

Recognizing the women to whom the poem 'The Greatest Show on Earth" is dedicated to is essential to grasping its meaning. Saartjie Baartman, Joice Heth, Anarcha of Alabama, and Truginini are four figures that represent the oppression of black women throughout history.

Saartjie Baartman, "The Hottentot Venus," is likely the most recognizable of the four. She was born into a Griqua family in 1789, and later moved near Cape Town where she became the servant of a farmer. Upon working there she was seen by William Dunlop, a surgeon, who was particularly interested in her "large buttocks" and overly developed labia. Luring her with the promise of wealth and fame, he took her to England where she was exhibited nude in front of
a large crowd of vulgar spectators who came to gawk and some, for a heightened fee, actually touched her. She died poor in Paris in 1816 after bouts with prostitution and alcoholism. Not even 24 hours after her death, her body was cast in wax, her brain and genitals dissected and pickled, and then put on display in the Musee de L'Homme, which ironically means Museum of Humanity. Eventually, her body was taken from public view in 1974 only to be kept in a storage closet until she was returned to Africa to be laid to rest in May of 2002 (Marais).

Joice Heth, the nurse of George Washington, was born in Madagascar in 1674. At age 15 she was stolen and sold off to slavery in America to Thomas Buckner. After being in the possession of several slave owners and outliving most of her relatives, Heth, then blind and quite feeble, (only 46 lbs), was displayed around the country as a marvel at the [supposed] age of 161 (The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill).

Anarcha was one of three noted slaves that first endured countless operations under Dr. J. Marion Sims Dossier, inventor of the speculum and the "founder of modern gynecology" (Brinker). Sims used experimental techniques on many of his slaves, asserting that black women could endure great measures of pain without the aid of medicine ''as well as dogs or rabbits"and that "plantation owners were glad to turn over their slaves to [him] for experimentation" (Bath). Anarcha was only 17 and underwent over 30 brutal surgeries.

The last of these, Truginini, born in 1803, would eventually become the last Tasmanian alive after the first Europeans came to their land and began killing them off for possession of the land. After living through rape and witnessing the murder and capture of several of her family members, she died in 1876, pleading "Don't let them cut me up! Bury me in the mountains" (ABC). Unfortunately, her last wish was not granted and she was buried, then exhumed and her
skeleton put on display until 1947. The "us all" part of Finney's dedication commemorates all black women who have been objectified, oppressed and brutalized.

The history behind the poem fittingly works its way in from the beginning with the title "The Greatest Show on Earth," alluding to the side-show exhibition experience the four subjects of the poem were exposed to. Finney makes reference to each of the women in particular stanzas; those to Baartman are especially evident in the first section of the poem: "...floating in formaldehyde jelly..." (line 2); "[t]he lilac plumage/ of our petaled genitalia/ ...all cut away/by pornographic hands..." (lines 11-23); and, towards the end, "her protruding mass/ steatopygia" (lines 33-34)... "...African music boxes/ whittled down to perfect/ change purse size..." (lines 67-69). The word steatopygia comes from the vocabulary of an early pseudoscience which aimed to prove the superiority of the white race (Drake). It literally means "large buttocks." Anarcha is referred to in line 46 "...the speculum hammered out..." and lines 59-60 use Truginini's last words. Finney also incorporates the poem's theme through repetition, repeating the phrase "what makes a freak a freak."

The use of figurative language through similes and metaphors undoubtedly gives the poem its vividness. She describes the women's legs as "broken like the stirrups of a wishbone" and goes on to complete the traditional relationship of a splitting wishbone to making wishes. This presents another metaphor, stemming from the belief that the person who gets the short piece of the bone does not get a wish and the possessor of the long piece does. In a sense the line
"somebody got their wish and somebody didn't" means that the women got the short piece and the oppressors the longer, thereby receiving their wish (wealth from domination of a people). Finney also compares the women's genitalia to a flower--"lilac plumage petaled genitalia"--and an "African music box", things that represent beauty and vitality; and by comparing them to "change purses", she relates them to a thing that can be opened, closed and used at will. This example also relates to the issue of money and profit.

Finney's diction is particularly crucial in projecting the intended imagery and meaning. "[S]terling silver lust" in stanza 8 can be interpreted as the lust for money, and the reader can actually envision silver coins. The image of thin bones being dug up is clear as well. In choosing to call the woman "headless" in stanza 5, Finney emphasizes how these women were merely body parts on exhibition, without a face or a mind. Her word choice at the bottom of stanza 6 ("...experimenting with Black women/ but never dissecting their own desires.") presents a particularly interesting medical or scientific pun and metaphor for how the white oppressors never analyzed their fascination for and attraction to black women. The word "normal" in the poem's last stanza is also important. It symbolizes the superior position the spectators felt they held--normal being the standard, and the other extreme belonging to those being exhibited, the freaks. Her use of "we" and "our" is meant to be inclusive of black women as a whole, and creates the effect of a chorus of voices speaking, which is far stronger than the solitary "I."

This poem is constructed in free verse, with no particular meter or rhyme scheme. Finney contructs particular stanzas differently for more emphasis, such as the couplets which make up stanzas 2 and 4: "somebody got their wish and somebody didn't" ... "so the normal pay their fifty cents/ to see what makes a freak a freak." She also indents stanza 5: "Go ahead,/ walk around her/..." which mocks the voice of a sideshow ringleader. And in stanza 9, Truginini's last words are italicized. There are some instances of rhyme, alliteration, and consonance, as in the first stanza's "split spread/unanesthetized legs..." and in the second stanza's "wish/ and...didn't" and "size" and "pried" and "desires" in the sixth. Perhaps the poet created "The Greatest Show on Earth" with such structural liberty with the intent of not restricting the memory of these women any more than they had been in life and death.


Works Cited


ABC. "Truginini (1812-1876)" 2004. www.abc.net.au/btn/australians/truginini.htm. 03/30/04

Bath, Rufus. "My Enemy Has a Face." 9 July 2002. http://rufusbath.enemy.org/bitter.htm.
03/30/2004

Brinker, Wendy. "J. Marion Sims: One Among Many Monumental Mistakes." 2002.
www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/poets/m_r/moss/sims.htm. 03/30/2004

Drake, St, Clair. "White Racism and the Black Experience." African Diaspora and
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Marais, Etienne. "Saartjie Baartman Tragic Venus." 2002.
http://www.insanetree.com/images/special/saartjie.htm. 03/30/2004.

Thwaites, Alan. "Truginini." 2002. http://www.teachers.ash.org.au/thwaites/trug.htm. 03/30/2004.

The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. "The Life of Joice Heth, the Nurse of General
George Washington, (the Father of Our Country), Now Living at the Astonishing Age of 161
Years, and Weighs Only 46 Pounds: Electronic Edition." 2000.
http://docsouth.dsi.internet2.edu/neh/heth/menu.html. 03/30/2004.

 

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